estirise ([personal profile] estirise) wrote2008-08-24 06:52 pm
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Typo post

I thought I'd add a post for general typos that I do in various stories. There's at least one other typo post under the "silly" tag. I'll also try to remember to sidebar this. (I do contribute to [livejournal.com profile] lol_typo as well.)


Fic: "College While Fighting" (Power Rangers Dino Thunder)

"I've heard 'Go West Young Man'" more times than I want to hear it this week," Trent Fernandez groaned as he flooped down on the Cyberspace's couch. (I have no idea what "flooped" means. Nor do I want to know.)

"Kind of hard to multitask in batter." (As opposed to cake mix?)

"So's Hayley," Trent said, "And so's my Dad. He wants me to go to an Ivory League school." (Apparently, Mercer wants Trent to go to a very clean school?)

Fic: "Tradition of No Fighting" (Kamen Rider Kiva)

"And Kiva can be reddened." (Kiva's pretty red anyway....)

Fic: "Useless Things"

"We need people to protect him while he goes through this change, because not everybody's going to be too thrilled to half someone with human ancestry as King." (Unfortunately, they'd be more than happy to hack the person in question in half.)

Nobori-san took her to his motorbike, producing a helmet from her. (Sounds painful, actually)

Kengo-san had babbled for several days to Wataru about incorporating the sound of Dr. Takamoto's loot in their next studio session. (Maybe those coins clinked really prettily.)

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