I need a beta

[estirise]

I finished my essay for ship_manifesto (due the 25th) and now need a beta. Anybody want to beta for me?

The essay is about 5-6 pages long at this point, and maybe needs to be a bit shorter. I really need someone to look over it and tell me what I need to fix. Knowledge of Kamen Rider Blade is appreciated but not required. (I am writing to an audience unfamiliar with the series, after all.)

One thing I've learned after rewatching the series? Nozomi is incredibly patient....

Comments

[metaclipse07.livejournal.com]

To make it up to you (and also because I don't know much about Kamen Rider, the last one I watched being Kamen Rider RX Black), I'll do it

[estirose.livejournal.com]

Okay, the essay is at http://estirose.livejournal.com/237540.html .

[metaclipse07.livejournal.com]

I'm pretty impressed with what you came up with. Good job.

[estirose.livejournal.com]

Thanks. Anything you see that I could work on/missed?

[metaclipse07.livejournal.com]

Not really, but that's just me.