Random ponderings

[estirise]

So, I'm trying to finish off my claim for occhallenge. This is because there's a fic I'm working on that I need to get done, not to mention I want to rewrite my NaNoWriMo manuscript this year, just so I san do a keepsake for myself courtesy Lulu.com.

Of course, those who know me well know that I continually rewrite things in my head. For example, Aya's original plan was to knock Kuramae-san out and escape, which she didn't know was a bit harder than she thought. Her second plan, had Jiro not been smart and observational and forced the issue, would have been to get her room free from being monitored, get the staff to let Megumi hang out, and make an escape plan with her. (The scientists, being smart, would have pretended to not monitor the room, figuring someone would make use of her 'priveledge' to try to escape.) Tomorrow, I might decide to rewrite it longer so that I spin out the Megumi and Aya storyline, though I'd like it if the fivesome could still escape.

That being said, now I have a plot bunny that basically wants me to rewrite the story/parts of the story from the POV of the institute staff. Which might be more interesting than Kuramae-san's dreams of the equivalent of a house, white picked fence, and 2.5 kids with Aya. Alas, I want to finish the claim fairly quickly (I'm using any and all poll responses to generate plot bunnies), so I'm going to have to concentrate on just Aya for at least the next week or however long it takes to write five more fics.